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And… Action! So, this is an action scene and I *think* it is too introspective-heavy. I was able to cheat and load up on Rez’s internal growth here–since both her body and mind move incredibly quickly–but in the next draft I’ll take a look at the pacing. Otherwise, I hope you enjoyed her throwing down. You know, taking name and such. I am itching to write the next scene, where we slip into Kin’s head and get his thoughts on all of this!
Again, thank you so much for reading!
Fantastic action packed read, can’t wait for more,impatiently waiting for you to complete this book. Have read all of your books on Amazon you have fantastic imagery, with fantastic odd looking yet humanistic aliens and kick butt badassed female leads. Big fan of your books.
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And… Action! So, this is an action scene and I *think* it is too introspective-heavy. I was able to cheat and load up on Rez’s internal growth here–since both her body and mind move incredibly quickly–but in the next draft I’ll take a look at the pacing. Otherwise, I hope you enjoyed her throwing down. You know, taking name and such. I am itching to write the next scene, where we slip into Kin’s head and get his thoughts on all of this!
Again, thank you so much for reading!
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Fantastic action packed read, can’t wait for more,impatiently waiting for you to complete this book. Have read all of your books on Amazon you have fantastic imagery, with fantastic odd looking yet humanistic aliens and kick butt badassed female leads. Big fan of your books.
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Thank you! So glad that you like my kick butt heroines!
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