5 thoughts on “Slow and Steady – By a Hare – Chapter Twelve

  1. Eek!! RUN!! Love the dynamic between Rez and Kin!!! This man needs some rope!! He needs to start carrying some with him at this point!🤣🤣
    Are we going to get chapter 13 this weekend?!?🤞🏻🙋🏼‍♀️

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    1. You are so right! He needs to carry rope with him from now on! I won’t get to chapter 13 this weekend, but hope to have it done by the end of next week. And thank you so much for reading and commenting! I greatly appreciate it.


  2. This chapter was kinda hard. I found my mood turning, and Kin was getting rather grim with his thoughts. I had to scrap several paragraphs, take a break, and try again. I think I got closer to the intended humorous tone of the story with the version that I’ve posted here. When it came time for Rez’s POV, though, I had a completely different issue. Pyx. He was hijacking the scene. But, once I got him under control, then Joia stepped right up. Honestly, I didn’t mind. I love, love, love the contributions of secondary and tertiary characters to a story. I did curb them some (seriously, even Ryorin was joining in on the fun!), so that I could refocus and finally kickstart Rez and Kin’s race! Can’t wait to write the next bit!


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