11 thoughts on “Slow and Steady – By a Hare – Chapter Six

  1. So, this chapter went suspiciously well. Hmmm. I mean, my kitchen is a disaster. My kids went feral in less than a day. I didn’t shower… But writing the chapter went smashingly!

    This is a lesson that I learned when writing Bane. It took a good year to get Therion’s story moving, and once it did, I focused on that to the detriment of everything else. Last night, I had been hoping to have repeat writing days (today, tomorrow, and Saturday) so that I could send my newsletter announcing chapters 6 & 7. Now, though, I think I need to slow down. Clean my kitchen. Domesticate my kiddos.

    But, I did correct that whole carapace (back shell of a tortoise) vs. plastron (belly/chest of a tortoise) debacle. Whew.

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  2. Love the story arc and the ‘slow’ (see what I did there?) burn relationship development between Kin & Rez! And showering is overrated, unless you live with others! Then, it’s a gift to your fellow man! 😂

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    1. I definitely have to add things on the fly! I really view this serial as a first draft. I already know I need to rewrite the first few chapters to condense the beginning. Poor Kin, I keep flopping on his voice between formal and informal speech patterns. (Still not sure which one I like better…) But it is fun to explore writing this way rather than creating an outline first. Thank you so much for reading!!

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  3. I was trying to hold out for as long as possible to prevent being impatient for the rest of the story but today I caved and this is so good and I relate to Rez soooo much can you tell😄

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    1. I am so thrilled that you are enjoying it and that you find Rez to be relatable! I’m trying to keep steady (hehe, punny) at one chapter a week. **Maybe** increase to two chapters a week. (Fingers crossed!) Thank you so much for reading! I truly appreciate it!

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